A poetic short sword, to freely cut, chop or stab in hand-to-hand combat with my rats. (©, copyright, auteursrecht).
Two heavens
Bombed each other
Today
With napalm
And white phosphor
While no one could tell
What exactly it was
That provoked this holy war
Of brother
Against brother man
There was high-fiving
And back-slapping
In hell
You’re currently reading “Holy War,” an entry on Gladius Poeticus
8.17.12 / 8am
Wow. Very profound indictment – what is ‘holy’ about war, indeed?
8.17.12 / 8am
Exactly right, Melody. Thanks!
8.17.12 / 9am
i love the flow 🙂
8.17.12 / 9am
Thanks! 🙂
8.17.12 / 10am
Sorry,it seems that i have no much idea about it…
8.17.12 / 11am
No problem. Thanks for reading and liking. 🙂
8.17.12 / 1pm
Deep stuff here…I like how the words seem simple but carry profound depth. I wrote something a while back…still a work in progress :)… It contains lines like…holy anger, holy wrath on all who claim holy war or war in the name of holiness. I like this a lot
8.17.12 / 2pm
Thanks, Boomie! Great comment! Looking forward to your piece. Love to you. 🙂
8.20.12 / 5pm
that is a great poem. So true!! I appreciate your “back-slapping in hell..”yup that’s about it!
8.20.12 / 5pm
You got it, Sue! Thanks!
8.22.12 / 3pm
Short, precise, impenetrable…exact!
A blessed word sound
8.22.12 / 3pm
Thank you, bro!
8.23.12 / 7pm
Ouch!
8.23.12 / 7pm
Indeed!
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